RTP draft: chair review
authorJean-Marc Valin <jmvalin@jmvalin.ca>
Tue, 13 Jan 2015 14:19:24 +0000 (09:19 -0500)
committerJean-Marc Valin <jmvalin@jmvalin.ca>
Tue, 13 Jan 2015 14:19:32 +0000 (09:19 -0500)
doc/draft-ietf-payload-rtp-opus.xml

index f14e69e..7f1f867 100644 (file)
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 <!ENTITY nbsp "&#160;">
   ]>
 
-  <rfc category="std" ipr="trust200902" docName="draft-ietf-payload-rtp-opus-06">
+  <rfc category="std" ipr="trust200902" docName="draft-ietf-payload-rtp-opus-07">
 <?xml-stylesheet type='text/xsl' href='rfc2629.xslt' ?>
 
 <?rfc strict="yes" ?>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
       </address>
     </author>
 
-    <date day='6' month='January' year='2015' />
+    <date day='13' month='January' year='2015' />
 
     <abstract>
       <t>
           <t>
             The bitrate can be adjusted at any point in time. To avoid congestion,
             the average bitrate SHOULD NOT exceed the available
-            network capacity. If no target bitrate is specified, the bitrates specified in
+            network bandwidth. If no target bitrate is specified, the bitrates specified in
             <xref target='bitrate_by_bandwidth'/> are RECOMMENDED.
           </t>
 
             DTX can be used with both variable and constant bitrate.
             It will have a slightly lower speech or audio
             quality than continuous transmission. Therefore, using continuous
-            transmission is RECOMMENDED unless restraints on network capacity
+            transmission is RECOMMENDED unless restraints on available network bandwidth
             are severe.
           </t>
 
         </t>
 
         <texttable anchor='opus-packetization' title="Supported Opus frame
-         sizes and timestamp increments">
+         sizes and timestamp increments marked with an o. Unsupported marked with an x.">
             <ttcol align='center'>Mode</ttcol>
             <ttcol align='center'>fs</ttcol>
             <ttcol align='center'>2.5</ttcol>
             <c>2880</c>
             <c>voice</c>
             <c>NB/MB/WB/SWB/FB</c>
-            <c></c>
-            <c></c>
-            <c>x</c>
-            <c>x</c>
             <c>x</c>
             <c>x</c>
+            <c>o</c>
+            <c>o</c>
+            <c>o</c>
+            <c>o</c>
             <c>audio</c>
             <c>NB/WB/SWB/FB</c>
+            <c>o</c>
+            <c>o</c>
+            <c>o</c>
+            <c>o</c>
             <c>x</c>
             <c>x</c>
-            <c>x</c>
-            <c>x</c>
-            <c></c>
-            <c></c>
           </texttable>
 
       </section>
           </list></t>
 
           <t>Interoperability considerations: none<vspace blankLines='1'/></t>
-          <t>Published specification: none<vspace blankLines='1'/></t>
+         <t>Published specification: RFC [XXXX]</t>
+         <t>Note to the RFC Editor: Replace [XXXX] with the number of the published
+          RFC.<vspace blankLines='1'/></t>
 
           <t>Applications that use this media type: </t>
           <t><list style="hanging">
             media streaming.</t>
           </list></t>
 
+          <t>Fragment identifier considerations: N/A<vspace blankLines='1'/></t>
+
           <t>Person &amp; email address to contact for further information:</t>
           <t><list style="hanging">
             <t>SILK Support silksupport@skype.net</t>
             <t>Jean-Marc Valin jmvalin@jmvalin.ca<vspace blankLines='1'/></t>
           </list></t>
 
-          <t> Change controller: TBD</t>
+          <t> Change controller: IETF Payload Working Group delegated from the IESG</t>
       </section>
 
       <section title='Mapping to SDP Parameters'>